P3 - Unit 21
Overall I believe that my pitch went well, I delivered my pitch well but I didn't look at my audience very often, this was probably due to the fact that I didn't make any flashcards. I kept my slides simple and didnt have any images, which I should have included for the character profiles slide, so i will add this into my new PowerPoint. I had a good representation of what my logo would look like, creepy writing and red eyes and a nun in the letters O's. However i could have gone into alot more detail in my slides as i kept it quite brief, i didnt announce my episode break down as it wasnt done and didnt make sense, so i plan to improve that quickly in my detail but still keep it short so my audience doesnt get bored. I also didnt include any specific music or soundtracks, but there will be creepy dark music such as deep pitch pianos.
Final Draft
